This is quite a decent effort.
You win extra points for the chopped amen breaks. I love em.
The bass is a good sound, but I don't think it's being modulated enough and it becomes a bit muddy in places.
Drums are clear and sharp. You've used some nice hits there and they're nicely sequenced.
Percussion is good.
I think it's far too slow for Neurofunk though.
This seems to be about 160BPM when I think it should be nearer to 175.
I normally make mine at between 172 and 176BPM.
Finally, I'm not a fan of the vocal at all. It sounds a bit awkward and brings me out of the zone.
You should be proud of this, though! It's a really good effort.
Thanks for publicizing it!